CRITIQUE Needed: Do These Headlines Work

[JamaulFinley]

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Do they make you interested in taking action? If not, what do you feel is missing?

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[Cordan]

They all seem like the same drab that is constantly seen online everyday. If that's what you are aiming for, well done.

Though if you want them to stand out - maybe shorter sentences? With more exclamation marks in between, rather than just at the end.

Some of the phrasing sounds awkward and stilted too.