Favor - Blog/Site Review

[askthebryan]

Ok, I have been plugging away at my "how to lose belly fat" blog for about a month straight, getting it to look right, ad placement, and opt-in stuff... I need reviews.

Do not be gentle, I am severeiously in need of honest judgement.

Peace

 

[jared]

It looks OK. However, is it just me or does that guy standing in the top right corner look like he has a 3rd degree sun burn? My god he is red.

 

[infoTim]

Just off the top of my head:

1. adjust the colors on the header graphic, the guy does look way red
2. "introducing the mitochondria?" wtf? How about "the hidden engines that burn fat" or something.
3. the top links ("home", "intro to...") wrap and look funky on my browser.
4. blinking text...
5. really big digg & rss buttons
6. do a spelling/grammar check, there's stuff like: "it's roll in the body..."

 

[askthebryan]

awesome - thanks for your guys's input, keep it up!

 

[Kfleming]

The rollover effect on the links in your top menu needs to be fixed.

 

[LazyHippy]

The popup is annoying....

and get that fuckin ebook out ya sig! (link doesn't work anyway!)

 

[infoTim]

7. The urls are ?p=1234 instead of search engine friendly

 

[maximus]

Change your leaderboard ads from red to blue to match the rest of your site.