I have intentionally set up my Twitter account to be a potpourri of updates, mixing up current affairs with a small % of marketing messages. I did this because in the beginning I didn't really know how to use Twitter, and I didn't want to get blacklisted by other followers as a blatant spammer.
However, now that I've set up a couple of landing pages, I want to write some killer catch phrases (I'm not real good at those) for a couple of campaigns using Twitter as my marketing tool of choice.
Here is where I need your supreme knowledge oh mighty wickedfire universe...
Here is a page: Acai Berry
First of all, rip it apart, give me the good with the bad...I'm thick skinned, I have 5 crazy brothers, so do your thing.
Second, how can I make it better? You see, this domain name I bought from blogger was/is my first attempt at making a landing page. I am going to spend more this week with a Wordpress host, but before I exhaust cash, I want to get it right. Blogger, for now is my playground.
And since, you all here in WF are uber kewl, cash driven, and downright crazy (my kind of folks) I actually value your direction. (I know, my therapist says I need to work on the folks I allow in my life)
Give it to me straight so I can get better...I want maximum exposure, and more money.:evil_laughter:
Thanks...
However, now that I've set up a couple of landing pages, I want to write some killer catch phrases (I'm not real good at those) for a couple of campaigns using Twitter as my marketing tool of choice.
Here is where I need your supreme knowledge oh mighty wickedfire universe...
Here is a page: Acai Berry
First of all, rip it apart, give me the good with the bad...I'm thick skinned, I have 5 crazy brothers, so do your thing.
Second, how can I make it better? You see, this domain name I bought from blogger was/is my first attempt at making a landing page. I am going to spend more this week with a Wordpress host, but before I exhaust cash, I want to get it right. Blogger, for now is my playground.
And since, you all here in WF are uber kewl, cash driven, and downright crazy (my kind of folks) I actually value your direction. (I know, my therapist says I need to work on the folks I allow in my life)
Give it to me straight so I can get better...I want maximum exposure, and more money.:evil_laughter:
Thanks...