What do you think of this landing page?

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boatBurner

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I've been spending the last 3 months building a product with a couple of buddies that we finally launched a couple of weeks ago. It's called StreamPro.io and it has nothing to do with this community. It's basically a poor man's Photoshop for live streamers that allows broadcasters to add static and dynamic visuals to their video streams.

Our launch has been received well and we're pretty encouraged to keep moving, but I wanted some gay webmaster feedback on ways to improve the landing page.

If you get a second, you'd make me feel like a real woman if you checked it out and offered any feedback.

On a side note, holy shit the struggle is real.

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scum bag said:
looking pretty sweet, you gonna be pushing this at TwitchCon?
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We are, and we're pretty excited about it. It's something like $10k to exhibit (too much for us peasants), so we'll be going as attendees working the grass roots angle.
 
boatBurner said:
We are, and we're pretty excited about it. It's something like $10k to exhibit (too much for us peasants), so we'll be going as attendees working the grass roots angle.
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nice, I'm actually doing the same with one of my projects
see you guys there
 
If I was a large streamer and relied on Twitch for my income, I personally wouldn't sign up and rely on this simply because it's "Free during beta". I'd want some assurances on what the fees might look like when you guys decided to move out of beta.
 
Your service looks great. I had a similar idea but I saw some streamers were already using some free services that did what I wanted to charge for. How do you plan to monetise with the existance of the free solutions?

In regards to your features, can a streamer use your service to have an animation or image pop up when a donation is made? You could also set up tiers that allows the streamer to set more exciting images/animations the higher the donation amount so that viewers are encouraged to donate more.

Also, did you design the landing page? It looks sweet. I saw a credit in the css to Daniel Eden (is that you?), I don't know if that's for the whole page or one aspect of it.
 
Hey bud, nice site. My 2 centers. Each of those services you listed on that page need an icon next to them. It looks incomplete.

Where it says FOLLOWER ALERTS, just come up with some fun like 2d icon to put next to it. It looks more pro in my opinion.

I like everything else about it. Nice, clean, and simple.
 
scum bag said:
nice, I'm actually doing the same with one of my projects
see you guys there
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I'll shoot you a PM. I'm actually really interested in what you do! Will you be attending both days and the after party?

Jake232 said:
If I was a large streamer and relied on Twitch for my income, I personally wouldn't sign up and rely on this simply because it's "Free during beta". I'd want some assurances on what the fees might look like when you guys decided to move out of beta.
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This is actually an eye-opening piece of feedback, thanks Jake.

King. said:
How do you plan to monetise with the existance of the free solutions?
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We have a couple of ideas, but we honestly aren't sure yet. Yah, we're an app with near 1,000 hours of production time and still haven't committed to a monetization strategy, so there's that. We're just talking with our users right now and making decisions based on their feedback.

King. said:
In regards to your features, can a streamer use your service to have an animation or image pop up when a donation is made? You could also set up tiers that allows the streamer to set more exciting images/animations the higher the donation amount so that viewers are encouraged to donate more.
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Yes, a streamer can use the service to show follower, subscriber, and/or donation alerts and make them completely custom. That's just one of the many "widgets" we offer, and we do it in a very intuitive drag and drop editor that is 100% web-based.

King. said:
Also, did you design the landing page? It looks sweet. I saw a credit in the css to Daniel Eden (is that you?), I don't know if that's for the whole page or one aspect of it.
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Yup, I'm the UI designer and developer on our 3-man team. I'm opposite an incredibly talented architect as well as a fellow gay webmaster, blureach.

I think Daniel Eden is the author of animate.css, an animation library we're using for some of the notification effects.

Shack said:
Finally someone posts a "need feedback thread" and the site is not a disaster. This looks very nice. Have you considered some icons on feature list?
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I would love to add some icons next to our feature list, but I'm having a hard time thinking about appropriate icons for each service and it seems expensive to sit down and think through each one of them. I might opt for some templated icons, but I haven't found any good sets yet. Any recommendations?
 
Jon said:
Jesus H Christ, since when did you become Mr. Cheerful?? Something has gotta be in your water supply... lol
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It's a good site and boatBurner is a hard worker. I love it when people successfully launch the projects they've been working on. Same goes for when somebody is able to sell their business for a lot of money. It's exciting stuff!
 
It's certainly better than most.

As others have said, icons would spruce things up.

Maybe a second colour for headlines to set them apart from text.

You've got this massive blue background with nothing going on in it. Perhaps an actual video overlayed into the background would be cool, a la Halfbike | Halfbike | The compact and light standing bike, anywhere with you! or a big image like https://www.spotify.com/us/ or similar. Big images and video are everywhere these days, people love shiny moving things, but just work out a way to go easy on mobile users.

Speaking of mobile, you could tweak your font sizes and margins a bit for small screens to fit a bit nicer. The big headline doesn't stack that nicely and you've got massive margins that could be reduced for the small screen.

I think the example screenshots could be a bit bigger, the 4 of them could take up the width of the page, and when shrunk each one most of the width of the phone screen.

Lastly I think your logo could use some work. It looks a bit like someone quickly typed out a placeholder as opposed to creating an actual identity.

Good luck with your venture!
 
Three thoughts...

First, you need quality testimonials. Maybe get the Twitch users listed lower on the page to beta test and provide them.

Second, popping the images distracts from your call to action ("Connect your Twitch Account"). Screenshots are definitely important, but maybe give the visitor a link to a page displaying them under the fold and after the main value proposition.

Third, it would be nice to have the features coded with an "overlay" - I can't remember the actual term - that fades in a color when the visitor mouses over them. The color could be the same as the button that says "Connect your Twitch Account." That would keep the eyes engaged, while pulling the visitor to your second CTA ("Get started now.")

Take everything I've said with a grain of salt. Nothing trumps your own data.
 
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JakeStratham said:
Three thoughts...

First, you need quality testimonials. Maybe get the Twitch users listed lower on the page to beta test and provide them.

Second, popping the images distracts from your call to action ("Connect your Twitch Account"). Screenshots are definitely important, but maybe give the visitor a link to a page displaying them under the fold and after the main value proposition.

Third, it would be nice to have the features coded with an "overlay" - I can't remember the actual term - that fades in a color when the visitor mouses over them. The color could be the same as the button that says "Connect your Twitch Account." That would keep the eyes engaged, while pulling the visitor to your second CTA ("Get started now.")

Take everything I've said with a grain of salt. Nothing trumps your own data.
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I love the idea of getting known Twitch users to test your product. Even pay them for a written review. Imagine getting some of the top guys behind your product. Shit you should even pay some of those guys an be their sponsor.

Secondly you are looking for the term rollover and he definitely needs rollovers on some of those items.
 
Make the call to action button a bit wider/bigger and darken the tone of red (darker than the other tones). Lead the users to the promise land..lol.

If you're split testing, try Orange. Seems to always convert better for my offers (try optimizely).
 
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