What's wrong with my landing page?

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theprodigy101

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Jumping back into affiliate marketing now after a harsh first start a few months ago. This time I want to get it right- but I know I'm not there yet, because you guys are probably going to laugh at this landing page. I'm also probably behind the times with the new measures Google has taken with Adwords.

How to Get Back With Your Ex

Let me know what you think about it- content, meta tags, whatever it may be, it'd be much appreciated.
 


your promoting clickbanks ......SHIT thats whats wrong with it..........other than that its fine
 
Break up your text, i'm looking at a wall of text, because of this i don't want to read it.

And therefore i will miss the Click Here link and move on.

Create sections and make it less text heavy, divide it up and use a nice big button, not overly big of of course.
 
for whatever reason i had a really hard time reading this sentence

These programs promise heartbroken souls their Ex's back and we take a look at the ones that deliver.
 
droplister said:
for whatever reason i had a really hard time reading this sentence

These programs promise heartbroken souls their Ex's back and we take a look at the ones that deliver.
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Yeah, its not easy to understand. Its like reading chinese.

Your font is wrong(too small and weird font). Your word formating is wrong also(grammar check ftw). Your images are not scaled correctly. Your tables need to be wider, try using % instaid of a fixed width.

Why are you sending your traffic to oprah.com/others? Whats the point of that? You want LOWER conversions?

You have it setup like a review site, yet you only review 2 sites.

Bassicly just delete it and start over.
 
better hide those affiliate link and where the hell is the CALL TO ACTION?

also I couldn't tell it was a review site...

you gotta separate the two offers, make one offer look better then the other offer
 
Thanks for all the advice guys- Will definitely be making those changes. Damn you guys are quick- WF is the shit. Just signed up for WA and made the same post- only got one response so far lol.
 
beejeebers said:
Also, that will get slapped silly for being a one page wonder.
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maybe, maybe not. I have plenty of 1 page landing pages with good quality scores. 1 tip i would suggest is to add a privacy policy and contact info. It seems to help 1 page landing pages not get slapped silly.
 
top margin is too big...the more info you can present them before they have to scroll, the better. also your font is completely fucked up on my system. try "Lucida Sans Unicode" instead of "lucida sans". im too lazy to check but that should be the right one.
 
BigWill said:
Yeah, its not easy to understand. Its like reading chinese.

Your font is wrong(too small and weird font). Your word formating is wrong also(grammar check ftw). Your images are not scaled correctly. Your tables need to be wider, try using % instaid of a fixed width.

Why are you sending your traffic to oprah.com/others? Whats the point of that? You want LOWER conversions?

You have it setup like a review site, yet you only review 2 sites.

Bassicly just delete it and start over.
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yeah call me a super n00b, but I used pages.google.com to make the site, because I didn't have frontpage on my vista laptop.

The reason I added the oprah links and shit on the bottom was because I didn't want it to look like a blatant squeeze page. I thought that was the new issue with google not giving good ad rankings for sites that merely have affiliate links and no external links. Or does that not really make a difference?
 
Alright so I decided not to scrap the entire project, even if it is a ClickBank product, just to use this as a learning experience if anything. I redid the entire site- the only thing I can't fix is figuring out how to do a PHP redirect and it's driving me crazy. If I use a meta fresh, it redirects all my links to a single URL in the meta command. I can't figure out how to do a PHP redirect for windows and GoDaddy sucks when it comes to databases. If anyone is willing to do so, I can send my code over, if you're willing to do all the redirect stuff for me on there. I would appreciate that very much. If not, looks like I'm just gonna have to use tinyurls (does google penalize for that too?)

Check it out, lemme know what you think:

exbackreviewers.com
 
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