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I got them written by a writer, Selling here at WF.

His sample writing :

Title- How to select a painter

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A home is where one spends the major portion of the lifespan. And it is one place where we experience all the emotions like joy, grief, despair and success. The ambience in the home is a major factor driving these emotions. The color of the walls can make you happy when you return home after a bad day in office.

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Painting and staining are some of the easiest ways to improve the look of your home and property. Interior painting is the application of paint on walls to improve your interior design. Using the right paint, choosing the right color, and applying it with professional technique are important. Hiring a professional painter to do the interior painting can be the best way to find the best home designing results. It is important to collect all the information you need on interior paint types, products, materials, and application techniques. It is also important to know the right kind of primer. You must need to know the difference between oil-based and latex paints, as well as proper surface preparation, application, cleanup, storage, and health and safety. Choosing a good painter is as important as choosing the color of walls. A good painting contractor crew can finish a job in a fraction of the time it would take one to do it one his own and many people would rather leave the mess of painting and staining to contractor.
A good painter can not only help you save bucks but also carves the final impression like an artist. Regardless, a good coat of paint or fresh coat of stain can transfer a property from run down to looking good with just a few swipes of a brush. Due to the process of weathering, the exterior paint is the one most prone to deterioration. When other building systems are still functional, it is always wise to do some cleaning, light scraping and hand sanding before applying new paint to the building. To choose the amount of gallons needed, a paint estimator tool can be used.
Now there are several points that have to be kept in mind while hiring a painter:

  • Contact several painters. Ask relatives, friends, neighbors, builders and designers for recommendations.
  • Decide the number of walls to be painted.
  • Consider any work you want to have done before painting. In case you have any damaged wall to be repaired, get it repaired before painting
  • Decide the colors and paints that you want to be used.
  • Have the painting contractors inspect the site and quote a price for the job. Also, make sure that the contractor is quoting the price based on the same specifications- area to be painted, number of coats and so forth.
  • Ask the painters for references and contact them. Check if the previous customers were satisfied with their work. In addition to that, check if the job was completed in time.
  • Execute a contract specifying the work to be done, total cost, payment schedule, start date and estimated completion date.
  • Make sure the contract specifies the paint brands and colors to be used for each location, as well as number of coats.
  • Make sure the contract also specifies that the painter is responsible for clearance and removal of paint from all surfaces.
  • Remove all furniture and other movable items before the painter is schedule to begin. Anything not removed should be piled together in center of room and thoroughly covered with drop clothes.

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Crash Drinking
Obesity among children
Fighting Obesity




Each normally of 500 Words.

Price : 15 USD $ . :music06:


Don't look at iTrader, there was a little confusion, it is solved now. ;)

All unique, CopyScape passed.
 


I got them written by a writer, Selling here at WF.

His sample writing :



Articles I got written :
Crash Drinking
Obesity among children
Fighting Obesity




Each normally of 500 Words.

Price : 15 USD $ . :music06:


Don't look at iTrader, there was a little confusion, it is solved now. ;)

All unique, CopyScape passed.

That article looks like it was rewritten from ezine.

You kept the structure of a decent article, but not the flow.

I find that you get better results by letting the writer write along a theme instead of taking prewritten text and making it copyscape proof.


****Edit: Nah, it's just a really bad article.
 
That article looks like it was rewritten from ezine.

You kept the structure of a decent article, but not the flow.

I find that you get better results by letting the writer write along a theme instead of taking prewritten text and making it copyscape proof.


****Edit: Nah, it's just a really bad article.

Ahh, I think you are right.

Can you tell me is this also a re written piece?

The tempo of obesity raises alarm because of its implications on our health. This article helps people understanding the severity of obesity highlights the reasons of obesity and encourage people to maintain a healthy weight.

Obesity are key factors of hundreds of diseases like diabetes, cardiovascular diseases, Hypertension, Dyslipidemia, Stroke, Liver and Gallbladder disease, Sleep apnea and respiratory problems, Osteoarthritis, Gynecological problems like abnormal menses and infertility and cancer.

So What Causes Obesity? When someone consumes more calories than he or she can utilize, the energy equilibrium is tipped in the direction of weight gain and obesity. In simple words we can say this happens when we eat too much and exercise too little.But there are many other reasons as well that contributes to obesity like Depression, Lack of sleep, Genetic disorder as it runs in family, any disease or drug that we intake can also cause obesity.

One major step that we need to take to decrease obesity or to live a healthy and long life is to change our life style. Losing weight is not as easy as gaining weight. We have to keep a continuous watch on what we eat at home at school or at our work and sneak out time for as much physical work as possible.


  • At home we should reduce the time we spend in watching television and in other sedentary behaviors and include some physical activity into regular routine. We don't have to go out and join gym for that there are plenty of activities that we can do at home to stay active like Washing and waxing a car, Washing windows or floors and Gardening etc.
  • At work make sure that food you take meets your nutrition requirements and low in fat and calories. Create more opportunities for physical activity at work sites like finding some time for walk during break, taking stairs instead of elevators.
  • When going out opt for food with lower calories and sugar. You can go for salads and sandwiches or ask chef to prepare your favorite dish without cheese.
  • On weekends instead of sit on computers whole day and playing video games we can go for some sporting activities which are fun too like Playing volleyball, basket ball, Bicycling, dancing, swimming. They all help in staying fit.


There is some coefficient shifting drugs open in industry which sounds suchlike a dieter's dream. But they aren't a favorable selection for everyone who's obesity. In fact, many doctors backlog them for people with weight-related health problems.

It's optimal to lose unit through a flourishing diet and daily exercise. But if excess weight has caused medical problems for you and you are struggling but still haven't succeeded in losing weight then weight-loss drugs may be healthy to aid you. But you should always direct doctor's advice before achievement for that.
 
Ahh, I think you are right.

Can you tell me is this also a re written piece?


It has that same rehash of a rehash look to it. The problem you're going to have rewriting stuff, is that unless you're dealing with a good writer, they're going to take a bad article and make it into a slightly worse article.

Understanding of context cant be faked.

These articles look like they were written by an Asian speaker of English with little understanding of common western speech patterns, or by a native speaker who is unwilling or unable to write cohesively.

In fact, because the constant rewriting going on, you're probably dealing with both of these problems in the same article.
 
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