landing page review?

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powell1

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I want to be an interwebs pay fer clicks millionaire too. I've noticed a few of these lately, so I thought I'd throw one out there. Here's my site:

DermaWand FREE Trial Offer

What do you think? All I did was pretty much reorganize their landing page, is that something that they will be ok with?
 


You just copied there form, which is not always the worst idea. You may want to improve it to make it a little different.

To the left of the click button, maybe put a before and after picture of a woman.

Also, if people scroll down to read more, give them another call to action (button or link) near the button to click too.

Add "Click Here" or something like that in your Order Now button.
 
I would follow the advice above. I would also even move that picture back to where it is on their form. I've found this style to work pretty decent, because people feel like they are in the same site. I also agree with adding a second call to action near the bottom, and make the call to action more obvious (ie Click Here).
 
powell1 said:
good ideas. I made a few changes to it. thanks guys! we'll see how it goes
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I like that idea, but I visited your page, and that lady in the before and after photo is a little repulsive. I know that's kind of the point on the before photo, but I'm not sure I'd get past that photo if I was interested. :anon.sml:
 
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