Did I presell this product good?

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AMagz said:
First thing - get rid of Bidvertiser, or at least make it blend in with the background.
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Done- I blended it in with the background. I don't wanna get rid of it because I have made some money on it...and I would have to delete it from 50 pages lol which would take forever. And thanks for responding!
 
I would get rid of the bidvertiser. If you refresh the page multiple times, you will notice that the ads never change. It's always the same two ads. That means you will most likely never get any further clicks from repeat visitors. Second of all, the ads are not targeted. You'll need a heck of a lot of traffic to pass even a $10/day mark with those ads.
 
ROIShareTeam said:
I highly doubt that Adsense will allow it's ads on any webpage related to traffic exchange.
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Yeah Adsense banned me a while ago for this :angryfire: and I was making alot better income with adsense.

Guys- will Yahoo click ads be alot better? Also did anyone check my product and see if I preselled it correctly? Again thanks alot for helping me so far.
 
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Since I couldn't tell what you were trying to sell, I'd say you didn't do a good job. It seemed like the SiteBuildIt page was out of place.
 
Just my initial impression of your index page from the perspective of a surfer viewing it for the 1st time.

In your introduction paragraphs, you are asking the viewer to notice your menu on the left hand side and click through that menu to view other areas of your site for further info.

Why not navigate the viewer through these areas directly in your introduction paragraphs. (in addition to keeping your menu bar, without directing them to use it)

example: (bold text) Are you new to Traffic Exchange (TE) ? ( end bold text)
then a brief summary on what it is all about (filled with keywords). Then end the paragraph with: Click here to view more details on TE

Then do the same for the other paragraphs.

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Just found it a little awkward in that way..... unless you're doing that on purpose (to make them frustrated and to click Bidvertiser to exit the page, haha -JUST kidding :)
 
nickycakes said:
presell this product well
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turbolapp said:
I was just coming into this thread to say the same thing.
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johnysc430 said:
that was the first thing that came to mind when I read the thread, lol
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Off topic -- but what's interesting is that you guys clicked his link.

Wonder what the ratio is of surfers typing in a word or phrase improperly, and getting results with the same misspelling - and converting on that (?)

You see a lot of people using domains of misspelled 1 word keywords (.com's) and either turning it into a site or redirecting to another site.
 
But lemon, that site did a horrible job in marketing that web building program. You're not supposed to be talking about a totally different topic on other pages, and then in one of the last pages, you throw in an unrelated offer. You need to focus all your web pages to tell the visitor more about the program you're promoting. Throw in a lot of screenshots, explain some special functions and it's ease. Otherwise, you'll never get any sales on that website. Plus, I would suggest re-doing the whole web site, needs to look much more attractive. At the moment it looks extremely plain. I know that there are much better free templates than that.
 
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