Website review and advice

[mala11883]

hi all very new to all of this stuff but wanna learn and get my site going could somebody or bodys please have a look at my site and tell me what you think bearing in mind never tried anythin like this before so go easy please also not sure if i can put website on this page so could some1 let me know thanks

 

[dchuk]

you should probably post the link

 

[mala11883]

www. iphonefourfree.co.uk had to separate as would not post

 

[masterm1nd]

The link still doesn't work ^^^

 

[mala11883]

should be working now just checked and all ok

 

[ii silver ii]

The text is massive and noone reads all in bold centred text because it's not natural on the eyes.

Your buttons need to be aligned to the left under the 'logo'.

You need a logo instead of just text then move this header text to the beginning of the white main part.

Every page has different formatting so there is no consistency to the design.

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[mala11883]

thanks for the advice ill look into that book only problem i have is i am using weebly as a host and it dont give to many options but i dont really know much about html things

 

[kblessinggr]

thanks for the advice ill look into that book only problem i have is i am using weebly as a host and it dont give to many options but i dont really know much about html things

Next advice would be to learn html, or hire someone who knows it, and move off weebly to a real host if you're serious bout AM.

 

[DinoVedo]

you do know that you spelt "for" wrong?? I doubt anyone is searching on google for iphone four free or anything close to that.. you will get no traffic at all unless your just planning on throwing up some PPC campaigns which i then doubt any will convert anyways....

i say scrap it and get out of this niche.. find something that actually gets searched for on google as your main domain keyword phrase

 

[DinoVedo]

by the way your site has tons of grammar mistakes... the one main thing that deters me from trusting a site is grammar.. if words aren't spelled right or not capitalized I immediately know its done by someone who obviously doesn't know web design so whatever hes selling must not be good either...

 

[mala11883]

Hi sorry yeah i know four is spelt right its meant to be four checked google searches alout of people search for the iphone four as well as 4 so went with that as for grammer not my best subject ill have to go over it again thanks for advice