Creative poetry that got me suspended from school for 5 days

Wiickedfire

Banned
Feb 21, 2010
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Here I sit in misty vapour
in a shithouse with no paper
I have no time to sit and linger
watch out asshole here comes finger.
 


Not that great, alliteration is bad, meter is wrong, rhyming is so-so.

You should be suspended for that. Keep working on it.
 
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Here I sit in shitroom vapor
Some damn fool used all the paper
Here I sit, here I linger
Watch out ass here comes my finger
 
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