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turbolapp said:
Me neither but the fairy tales post made me lol
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OK, I will explain. This was the original post:

Indians don't write how they speak. No one writes their accent. Indians are educated in a British style system, odds are that Sumit, with his 160 IQ is probably more literate than 98% of the population of North America.
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The first two statements try to establish that Indians are better while writing, and worse while shhhpeakkking. The inference is that even though Indians have an accent, they can articulate things better through writing. The third statement states that Sumit is highly intelligent, based on the first two statements (since all of the statements are part of the same paragraph, and there is no other reason for the first two statements to be there, other than to support the third statement.).

For that argument to hold good, Sumit must be a good writer, and a bad speaker. Otherwise, the statements won't make any sense, wrt Sumit.
Now, this is Sumit's latest post:
sumitdhawan09 said:
Why make funny of me? I no do bad to you.
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strikernr said:
How is he doing affiliate marketing with that kind of writing style?
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He has been India's #1 affiliate marketer long before the British left India in 1947. He banked really hard pushing walking-sticks during Gandhi's Dandi March and banner-making software during the Quit-India movement.
 
about as good as this one:

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