First Landing Page- Please Review

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dewoof01

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Ok guys,

So this is a sample of my first landing page. Go easy on me as I honestly have not really done a landing page before just direct linking. Please give your advice and changes, as well as big things i am missing. http://www.easyfreeoffers.net

Thanks for the tips in advance,
 


1) Change the Click Here button, make it central aligned and not so great and square.
2) The video player should be above the fold.
 
My iPad arrived yesterday and I am loving it. I will keep you updated.
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Kind of a dead giveaway. At least acknowledge that it's not out yet and that the company provides 'Apple store gift certificates'.
 
Ok I am making the changes to the click here button (I did kinda think it was offensive, and the video is before the testimonials.
 
More important than asking on the forum is having Google Website Optimizer or something set up so the visitors tell you whether it's good or bad.

It looks good though, you put some effort into it so I hope it works well for you.
 
The iPad even though Steve Jobs has been developing it for years, still needs more testing. They need to test it to see what it is capable of. Now you may be wondering who performs these tests?


YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!
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You need a comma after "Ipad" and you have 4 too many exclamation points after "YOU!!!!!!!!!!!"
 
You need your "click here" above the fold. you also need a strong headline up there. Depending on where you are in the world, be careful of this `flog` and recent rule changes with the FTC
 
ppcIcon said:
You need your "click here" above the fold. you also need a strong headline up there. Depending on where you are in the world, be careful of this `flog` and recent rule changes with the FTC
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Sorry for my noobness but what is "above the fold"? I take it that it has something to do with being higher up on the page.
 
The call of action isn't visible. I have to scroll to see the button. You want the button to be above the fold, so I see it as soon as the page loads.

If you are using a flog type of lander, then you want to keep your lander as amaturish as possible. Stop using that cheezy stock Click Here button. Instead hyperlink traditional text. The simpler your flog is, the higher the CTR/CR.
 
"Above the fold" is anything that is visible above the bottom edge of your monitor without scrolling. If you have an 800x600 resolution monitor (first kill yourself) then about 450 pixels of your page is "above fold". I say 450 because you'll lose some of the vertical space to toolbars, bookmarks bar, address bar, etc.
 
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i'd recommend cloaking your links as well... links that point to 'redirect.tracking202.com/lp/xxxxx' are lame...

use links like 'easyfreeoffers.net/GIVEMEMYFUCKINGIPAD' and redirect that to your t202 link.
 
i helped you out by filling out your form....

looks like you've got some work to do.
 
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