Help on offer site

lemons884

lemons884

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Oct 15, 2008
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I created a offer site last week

Win A Iphone

Currently using google adwords for some advertising- just using promotional credit so no real cash.

Too many offers? is the design okay?

Please critique if you wish ...and give me suggestions on how to get the word out there about it. This isn't something I'm gonna SEO for.
 


'Win an iPhone' you mean?

I don't know what an 'Iphone' is.... This also applies to your drop down.


Also... iPhone 5? LOL...


Other than that... only testing will tell you if it is a good LP or not.
 
Hav3n said:
'Win an iPhone' you mean?

I don't know what an 'Iphone' is.... This also applies to your drop down.


Also... iPhone 5? LOL...


Other than that... only testing will tell you if it is a good LP or not.
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ah hell iphone 5 aint even released yet. Yeah I'm not good at grammar. so what you wanna fight about it. :ak:

Thanks for these suggestions. I got some design flaws going on...I need to move my submit form up I think the image pushing it down is not good.
 
Just my two cents : No one will ever want to choose older versions of the iPhone so maybe you should take out both iPhone 3G and 3GS.
Oh, and you have iPhone 4 listed twice btw.
 
Update those graphics and get a better landing page.. The more professional the higher chance you will get the sale..trust is something you can determine just by looking at the site epically with free offers.
 
Meh. Ugly can work. You won't know till you try (aka test)

<title> tag still has Iphone FYI.
 
Hav3n said:
Meh. Ugly can work. You won't know till you try (aka test)

<title> tag still has Iphone FYI.
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Noted. Thanks

Yeah I think my offer page looks ugly but I am already running a campaign so we'll see.

Could you guys refer me to a good land page designer? I am not good at designing anything...in fact I hate it. Would rather outsource.
 
lemons884 said:
Noted. Thanks

Yeah I think my offer page looks ugly but I am already running a campaign so we'll see.

Could you guys refer me to a good land page designer? I am not good at designing anything...in fact I hate it. Would rather outsource.
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Shoot me a PM or add me on AIM. I design them.
 
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