Landing page critic

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Onedollaridea

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Game Rental Landing pages.


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    • This page has no proper flow
    • the text is too clutered in the grey boxes.
    • the logo of the advertisers are way too blended
    • NO call to action box
    • the “one” , “two” , “three” buttons should be in numeric form and are way too large
    • TRYING TOO HARD TO LOOK LIKE WEB 2.0

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    • This page is better thant the last one
    • Again trying to hard to look like web 2.0
    • The reflections are distracting the viewers
    • Call to action is too blended with the background
    • The colors constrast sucks.
Web Hosting Landing pages

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    • The above page probably has zero conversions
    • You do not know where to click as buttons not standing out
    • Information overload
    • the layout sucks
    • too many images and not enough text. They will have bad QS

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    • too many advertisers and this will just confuse readers
    • prices not current
    • buttons needs better look
    • Overall the layout and flow is good
    • Good Navigation on top
    • Good color choices
Credit Report Landing pages


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    • THERE IS NO LAYOUT!
    • too many call to action buttons
    • too much white space
    • No flow
    • The text is all over the place
    • images have borders in blue which looks unprofessional

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    • too much text
    • the call to action is too small
    • the text doesnt look like attractive enough to click
    • Overall good layout
    • good use of side boxes
    • Needs few bigger images for ppc
    • This will suit really good for serps .
 


you know what I have just realised? That there will be few members on this site whose landing pages I have reviewed above and hope they don't get pissed off.lol
 
Hopefully if the owner was ousted they'll take it as constructive criticism. It truly is.

The one with no layout looks like its missing the CSS file.
 
nintendowii said:
Free Stuff critique mine
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mate is this a magazine site or are you trying to sell a product?

1) too much information on the page.
2) page is too wide, it may not fit all screens etc
3) too many banners
4) I like the white spaces.
5) Good use of images
6) Use one product at a time and you will get better conversions
 
ROFL is that a fucking joke? Did you actually use uberaffiliate's picture in that? HAHAHAHAHA

btw, excellent thread Onedollaridea. Most excellent.
 
nintendowii said:
Control Diabetes what about this one
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It's 100 time better than the mess you posted on this thread before but still needs some work.

I would add some links towards the bottom, about us, privacy policy, terms, contact us, etc... This will help your QS.

Also I would make it a button rather than text saying "(click here)". Make it look like a button, make it a color that stands out and don't put the text "click here" on the button but rather use something like "learn more" as the button text.
 
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