Landing page feedback - noob

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rgordon83

rgordon83

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Hey,

Working on my first landing page using wordpress. I was wondering it anyone would be kind enough to give me some feedback on the page. If so please PM me and i'll send URL. thanks!
 


dude, you want help but we have to pm you? ridiculous :error:

post url here just like everybody did!
 
font too small, too wordy, shouldn't have to scroll to see call to action, shadow effect on pink text is not good, lose "Welcome!" - taking up too much real estate, make the iwon graphic at top of page a link back to home page, lose the wordpress and theme outbound links, bigger prize photos...
 
A few quick things...

1. Never EVER put the call to action below the fold. Unless you hate conversions.

2. Speaking of the CTA, the button needs to be much bigger and you need to draw more attention to it.

3. Overall, the page lacks a focal point and is too cluttered. My eyes were all over the place.

That's my free LP advice for the day. Take it or leave it. :)
 
Do you guys think it would help if i Turn the prize gif into the CTA? So maybe "Play now. Over $70 million in cash in prizes already awarded" and flash between that and the prizes. then loose some of the other copy?

Also, should i kill the animated gif in the top right?
 
why did you use WP at the first place? WP is not designed specifically for ppc. Too many element distracting visitor attention there. My advice is to contact MyOwnDemon ASAP to make a pimpin LP :bowdown:

seriously, he did one for me and gave me good conversion :thumbsup:

The best gay designer here ^_^
 
i used WP b/c i can't program so i figure it would be a good way for me to test an offer. I also like that WP has multiple pages so i have different campaigns sending to different pages.

For example i can have a ppc campaign for "free casino games" and drive that to the casino games page...

It's also my understanding that more pages=better QS. is that correct?

anyway, I'll look up MyOwnDemon... thanks for the reco
 
wow you got new customer! Give me discount next time will ya hahaha

rgordon83 said:
For example i can have a ppc campaign for "free casino games" and drive that to the casino games page...

It's also my understanding that more pages=better QS. is that correct?
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correct, and it can be arranged easily ;)
 
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