My Shoe Money System Song Entry. Help Me Win This Shit!



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I raise you Waggs

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I could care less about the money, honestly. I really just want to go to the Playboy Mansion, since I live in L.A., and this will probably be the only chance I ever get.

Just to prove it to you, if I win, I'll donate all of the money to a charity of your choice.

Fair enough, although I hear the playboy mansion is shit compared to what it used to be, considering any Joe blow with enough dough can have their own party there...
 
OP yours is ok. Rob has better lyrics.
I am biased cause rob had some really sick tunes in the past, so neither of you gets my vote on this one.
 
What is wrong with Rob Hustle's Shoemoney track exactly?

It's a weak beat. The riff/melody line is boring/unimaginative.

We must have huge differences in taste if you liked the KO submission.

Didn't necessarily like it per se, but it seemed more like a 'theme' song versus a straight-up song.

P.S. No homo for Rob Hustle. I just think he has some talent.

He does, that's why I said his delivery carried the track. If you have good delivery, you can rescue any song, no matter how boring or atrocious the beat.
 
I vote for Wagenheim, hands down!
He's taking this, the moment he decides to enter... You know it!!
 
[ame=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MWZAyabqlTQ]YouTube - Dramatic Steve Wagenheim[/ame]
 
Brandon your track was solid and the production was great. Hustle's flow is tighter though and it carries it to the top. That's what it is. Real talk. If I was gonna make 1 recommendation to you its that you gotta go harder on your hooks. "Shoe Money System" x 10 isn't really doing it.