New Site, Feedback?

Enigmabomb

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I'm looking for a little feedback on my new site:

Joshua Ziering's Home »

Let it rip. I'll give karma to people who don't just rip but also suggest how to fix what they rip.

This is part of a larger strategy, but I'm interested in what you think about the site specifically.
 


+1 on the neon green/yellow also it's not providing enough contrast for the white text to pop, affects readability. If you love the green go with a dark color for the text, JMO. Also breaking up the text wall with subheadings will make people more likely to read. The internet audience has a very short attention span. It would be a shame to lose them on such a minor aesthetic issue, I enjoyed the piece.
 
A bit daring to use so much space above the fold with the massive heading. It makes a statement but on my laptop I have to scroll to see any of the featured post title on the homepage. I would split test making better use of the above the fold area with content.

This problem is even more pronounced, for example, on the contact us page where there is a massive blank area and you need to scroll for the info. Also, I would put basic conact info (email / social media / phone if you want calls) in the top right of the header.

I think the lime green is pretty cool personally. Choice of bold sans serif headers with the serif body text is a good choice IMO, works well.

Otherwise, in terms of content, it could be clearer what you do and what the point of the site is. For example I would use the white space to the right or below the log to put Josh Ziering - Internet Entrepreneur (or web marketer or whatever way you want to style yourself. Personally while "problem solver" is edgy it may be ambiguous for people who don't know you).

The About section contains easily the most compelling content on the site and should be promoted to the homepage IMO.

In chrome Win 7 the right column on this page doesn't float to the right on my screen resolution, but floats below the left column. Here is a free fix, change right-col css to:
max-width: 630px;
width: 60%;

Similar problem on my screen res (1300px wide) on greenblock1 div, try using percent or smaller left and right padding

EDIT: bonus tip. First bullet in benifitsbox div has bullet point to the fight for first li in my browser. For some reason removing "float: left;" from benefitp will fix this
 
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Has a lot of potential. I like how large everything is. It makes the content unavoidable and easy to follow. Definitely feeling the layout and content blocks for sure.

However, the lime green hurts my fucking eyes. You should experiment with black... it would make your page look more "lavish" and grounded. Idk... any color except an eye-raping bright one would probably work.

But good work!
 
Neat design, but no clear call to action. After 5 seconds I didn't know what you did or what you wanted me to do.
 
Oh, just noticed something:

I went to your "about" page and neither your logo or nav link to your homepage. You may reconsider adding a quick and easy way to go home from internal pages.
 
i'd do something more like this..

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your current headline is too dynamic, hard to read.. i'd use my approach (maximum contrast) and create (or have created) some sort of illustration that conveys a problem that could be an opportunity in some sort of unique manner. like the one i suggested, with the fat chick even though she has a pussy like the rest of 'em AMIRITE???
 
OMG please tell us what kind of opportunity you'd want with that woman and also why she is holding a garden hose???

It's not about what I want, it's the headline. If all problems are ugly oppotunities, then the problem of not wanting to fuck a fat chick, could be construed as an opportunity if you consider (a) pussy is pussy, (b) you could comatose yourself into a state which she's hot.. Neverminding the fact i was sarcastic.
 
It's not about what I want, it's the headline. If all problems are ugly oppotunities, then the problem of not wanting to fuck a fat chick, could be construed as an opportunity if you consider (a) pussy is pussy, (b) you could comatose yourself into a state which she's hot.. Neverminding the fact i was sarcastic.


There has got to be another way. A tornado with money blowing around in it? Something, anything but fattie sluts