Opinion on my landing page

[jrumpf]

ok WF'ers. I would like everyones opinion on my new landing page. alot of the site isnt done and I have alot of content to fill in -but starting to crank out a few landing pages for ppc and wanted some general opinions.

the landing page is at Get a FREE SinglesNet account today! | Dating Rating

My plan is to have this site with some great content, and then to also have landing pages such as the one above. I know Wordpress has been a popular platform, but I like Drupal better -thats what this page is using.

Thanks for the honest reviews.

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[vertone]

I like it .. looks pretty good.. Has it made any money yet?

 

[mason]

it's alright. the thing I hate about it is the fact that there's so much information hitting you all at once.

I noticed you have some duplicated content. does anyone know how that could affect QS? I always make unique stuff on my pages since I wasn't sure about the QS issue.

 

[NeilT]

Test it but I dought that big add will get you any conversions. It just makes the page look crowded and takes my eye away from the review section.
It prob needs a better call to action. Maybe add an extra sign up button above the fold before the top10 sites graph.

 

[thedamian]

I agree that testing will tell you if it works.

But it's missing the most essential part of any AD,may it be in newspaper or the web.

You're missing the ONE THING. the customer isn't shown clearly what to do, and is not only confused on what to do. Am I suppose to click on the categories on the left?

One thing is that the face of the chick is clickable, so that's good.
But WAY too much information. I mean WTF is those graphs...The size of my penis will get?

Heck that graph is so tiny that's the size of my cock right now.
(And for those that are feeling better about their erected members, I'm talking about it flaccid...sorry boys.)

And the REAL ACTION button is BELOW THE FOLD!!! Jeesh!

It's good to show OTHER options on the left. It'll give you a "better quality score" but who cares if google likes it, if no one will click!

 

[ImagesAndWords]

My first impression was "so what I'm supposed to click here to move forward?" You don't want your visitors thinking that for even a split second. Make it extremely obvious what they need to do to try the offer. (And perhaps reduce some of the clutter on the left sidebar).

 

[snavr]

The sidebar links are good for Google ... but the better place for them is in the footer. Make like 3 or 4 short columns (blog style) at the bottom of the page and put them there if you want to keep them.

 

[jrumpf]

thanks... crappy conversions... I'll repost version 2 and let you guys know how it does. Thanks for all the insightful info.

 

[Dr_Ngo]

-Make the call to action button bigger, like 5 times the size. And change the text from "sign up" to something better
-Make the above button, above the fold
-You have too many benefits of joining, like 10. It's information overload. Make it 3-5 and make the font bigger.
-I'd put the compete.com graph below the fold. It's a great idea though.
-profit

 

[nohatter]

Why is SinglesNet rated #1 in Online Dating?
DONT talk like your them!

 

[AlexJames]

The CTA should be much easier to find.

 

[mattm136]

Keep the important information and call to action above the fold. Make your call to action bigger. A good resource for optimizing your landing pages is at h**p://seldomstatic.com/top-landing-page-tips-from-the-pros/

 

[Aveligand]

Off topic, but that chick looks a bit like jessica alba. mmmm

 

[guysmy]

it looks good. how about a logo icon that has more to do with dating? red is always good for dating... the colour of lust.

 

[searchfordeal]

too busy, too many links, looks not attractive..

 

[vivianrollins]

looking at your source code ... no meta for keywords?