Hey, this is the first squeeze page I made myself. Let me know what you think.
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Please don't use the term "squeeze page" here. It's a fucking lead gen page. "Squeeze page" is an ebook douchebag term, not a regular business one, unless of course you WANT to fall into that category, then by all means, it's been over 24 hours since I banned anyone, and I would be happy to accomodate you on it if need be. 
Please don't use the term "squeeze page" here. It's a fucking lead gen page. "Squeeze page" is an ebook douchebag term, not a regular business one, unless of course you WANT to fall into that category, then by all means, it's been over 24 hours since I banned anyone, and I would be happy to accomodate you on it if need be.
LOL thanks I needed that. And thanks emp for the tip.
There seems to be an odd mixture of "Find your true match" and "Get laid more". Either you go the romantic line or the fuck-line. I doubt that those two mix well. Your headline reads "Lover's paradise online friendship". Now what? Love, fucking or friendship? We all know that "being just friends" and fucking usually don't go together.
So I'd say that you should target more. Split it up in three groups: Fucking, loving and friends (even though I doubt anyone looking for dating advice want to learn how to be "friends" with the opposite sex).
That way you will be able to write consistent messages to the list.
If your goal is to push D'Angelo's stuff, go for the "get-laid-fucking"-topic. That's your target market. Drop the romance-shit. People who want that would only be offended anyway.
But I really like the design, especially because I couldn't do that.
So I'd say that you should target more. Split it up in three groups: Fucking, loving and friends (even though I doubt anyone looking for dating advice want to learn how to be "friends" with the opposite sex).
That way you will be able to write consistent messages to the list.
If your goal is to push D'Angelo's stuff, go for the "get-laid-fucking"-topic. That's your target market. Drop the romance-shit. People who want that would only be offended anyway.
But I really like the design, especially because I couldn't do that.
Nice page, although I would shrink the largest graphic so that everything is more visible to the user at once - without having to scroll down to see more.
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