Review my landing page

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Yea , you could try adding some more content and making the site a little more attractive .
 
Doesn't even look like a website..more like a piece of paper

Download a theme or something...get a CMS or Blog Platform..5 minutes..should pay off
 
A lot of the time in AM, you wanna keep things simple. But your page is simply too simple. Bring in some kind of a theme with at least one more color, perhaps as a background with the white as the body.

Bring up the two first videos so that they're visible right away without the user having to scroll down (i.e. what was said about "above the fold").

Make a couple of different variations of the page and split-test between them. Try with or without some customer testimonials. With or without videos, etc.

If you set up Google Analytics and CrazyEgg on the site, you will be able to monitor and see why your visitors think your page sucks (or not).
 
You're page requires serious work. You have to compare your offer page to you're competitors, since those are the people with whom your offer will be competing against.

The page doesn't look in anyway attractive to me. No colors, no format, just plainly dull.

Second of all, get rid of the videos. I honestly don't want to stare at a video of sliding images, with difficult text to read. If you're making a video, it has to be a "video"; with narration. Once again, compare yourself to your competitors.

Also, why is your second video promoting a completely different offer page : http://vincedelmontefitness.com/home2.php
 
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