Ringtone LP feedback

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stoxup said:
I like the content portion, but like others have mentioned the header takes up too much screen real-estate. Otherwise, I think the "review" type LP might offer a breath of fresh air to the niche.

Mind PM'ing who your landing page designer is?
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Umm yeah you def don't want to use whoever his landing page designer is... In all honestly that is a horrid landing page and the guy couldn't make a quality graphic if someone was holding a gun to his head.
 


WayneDog said:
Umm yeah you def don't want to use whoever his landing page designer is... In all honestly that is a horrid landing page and the guy couldn't make a quality graphic if someone was holding a gun to his head.
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In the designer's defense, this happens to be the one dud he did for me. He did a few other LP's that came out really nice and are converting quite well.

But i agree, this is not his best work...
 
Bring your reviews higher, and don't waste your above the fold space.
wtf is up with the huge header? waste!
 
It's a great design, but probably not best suited for your needs here: to get people to click through to the ringtone offer.

It's pretty busy for an affiliate offer LP. I remember a couple of rule of thumbs: Don't make them think, and Keep It Simple Stupid.
 
BigWill said:
When you search for "phish ringtones" and it appears on your page, it should link to the corresponding page on your sponsors site. When you click through it shows ringtones, but no phish ringtones. You need to have it pull up all of the available phish ringtones. That way people can just click download and enter their number. That skips the step of them having to search AGAIN for something they had already searched for. You want it to be as relevant as possible. The surfer would get discouraged if they just hit a generic page after doing all that searching and clicking.
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Just figured out how to do this. check it out: Cellpunch hits you with the best Phish ringtones | Cellpunch.com

u can replace phish with some other bands to test

Working on other, larger, design issues as well...
 
There's too much wasted space, the design is overly gratuitous and the color scheme hurts my eyes. The header is completely unnecessary. Of course you should go ahead and test it, but I don't see that being a successful page. Check out MyOwnDemon's work if you want a real LP designed.
 
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