Rip my landing pages to shreds, please!

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Rule #1 The only way to judge a landing page is with real traffic

Rule #2 Changes should only be made through split testing
 


First off, please hire a designer. Your sites look like scams. I would NEVER put my information is a site that looks like that (LP1)...

Also, for LP1, you have WAAAY too many "headlines" trying to grab my attention. And they all suck.
Copyblogger has some good headline writing tips:

13 Emotion-Based Headlines That Work | Copyblogger
Can You Write an (Almost) Unbelievable Headline? | Copyblogger
The Problem with Waffly Headlines | Copyblogger
http://www.copyblogger.com/are-you-writing-headlines-that-sell-stop/
http://www.copyblogger.com/five-common-headline-mistakes-and-how-to-avoid-them/
Seal the Deal: 10 Tips for Writing the Ultimate Landing Page | Copyblogger

enjoy!
 
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trigatch4 said:
  1. Find existing offers that look good
  2. Press Print Screen
  3. Paste in photoshop
  4. Erase all the content and photoshop it to look like a blank slate with the design features in tact
  5. Replace with your own content
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I hope he doesn't listen to you. If people can't create their own stuff that works then they're in the wrong industry...


i fuckin hate when people rip off my pages and i don't rip off other ppl's pages. Why is everyone so shady in this industry? Can't people think for themselves?

::-rep in my head::
(i'll leave the real rep robbing to Stack Paper)
 
rgordon83 said:
First off, please hire a designer. Your sites look like scams. I would NEVER put my information is a site that looks like that (LP1)...

Also, for LP1, you have WAAAY too many "headlines" trying to grab my attention. And they all suck.
Copyblogger has some good headline writing tips:

13 Emotion-Based Headlines That Work | Copyblogger
Can You Write an (Almost) Unbelievable Headline? | Copyblogger
The Problem with Waffly Headlines | Copyblogger
Are You Writing Headlines That Sell? Stop! | Copyblogger
Five Common Headline Mistakes and How to Avoid Them | Copyblogger
Seal the Deal: 10 Tips for Writing the Ultimate Landing Page | Copyblogger

enjoy!
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Cool! That's awesome advice!

Looks like you are hired, mediastar ;)
 
What the hell is the difference between a landing page and a home page. Newbies don't know what split testing is and shit if they don't know that then how are they to know how to do it? I thought I was here for help. I already got bombarded with terminology I don't understand by a super affiliate giving a free seminar.
 
ldsmedia said:
What the hell is the difference between a landing page and a home page. Newbies don't know what split testing is and shit if they don't know that then how are they to know how to do it? I thought I was here for help. I already got bombarded with terminology I don't understand by a super affiliate giving a free seminar.
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take the time and effort to read - its all here - you just need to invest some time and absorb it.

Dave
 
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