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Navuud

Navuud

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Hello my fellow marketers, aka assholes, or demon spawn as Bill Hicks would say.

I'm new here so ... um... hi?

Hoping I could get some reviews on my very first itty bitty site.. so please be constructive in your elegant criticism.

I haven't put up any product links yet as I've been told allmighty google don't like that, waiting till i'm on the first page of google. Is that vaild?

the site is:

H Titty titty please : // procleansegoldreview [dot] net

It's obviously based on the one product but I got bored and started writing other articles, making this a soon to be comprehensive site with a shitty url name.

Thanks in advance for any replies
 


Welcome. Bill Hicks don't hate us little freelancers. I'd like to think so anyways.


Some suggestions:

Take some content out of the first article, 200 words is something the reader will be comfortable with and enough to give the needed information.

Add the featured and popular sections to the side bar.

Get a good header graphic for your banner. Or just a logo image that looks professional.

Replace the calender at the bottom with an advertisement, calender isn't necessary and a huge waste of space is going on there.
 
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