Team of Quality writers here, two review copies available.

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First off, I've been struggling with what to write in this review as he hasn't had many takers on the articles, and I hate to be a debbie-downer.

Communication: 3/5 - I sent my keyword in on December 8th, and forgot to give him an email address to send the article to (my fault obviously). Confirmation of order received in thread only. Sent PM on 12/14/11 asking update of status, couple days later he replies in thread rather than through pm (which is obviously because he doesn't have PM privileges yet) and says he emailed it a couple days ago. I have no idea what email he sent it to. And then takes a couple more days for him to get the article to the correct email address. Miscommunications can happen, and this could be a one time occurrence.

Speed: 3/5, even if the order was received it took about 4 days to finish (order 12-8-11, on 12/14/11 he says it was done on 12/12/11). With the low amount of activity in this thread I would think a couple days would be more than adequate.

Quality: 3/5, this one may be my fault, I purposely gave him a tough assignment. One that required research and comparing two topics. The research side he seemed to do a good job on, however the grammar and flow of the article is not very good. I will likely have to rewrite the entire article to make it usable. Content was 535 words.

Price: 4/5, While I received a free review, I would expect this to cost about .60/100 words instead of .80/100. I would not use his LSI service.

Overall: 3/5 - I'm interested in hearing what DNS's experience was in comparison to know if this is a one time deal or what.

He needs to work on sentence fragments, plural vs singular nouns and adverb tenses, the use of "an" and "a", run on sentences, and the use of paragraph headers rather than just moving from paragraph to paragraph with words like "Firstly, let us..." and "In short, ...".

I would only use this article for spinning and article submissions, there is no way in it's current state it could get near my site. I likely won't use this provider again, sorry buddy.

Thank you for your kind review, i have another review taker let me c what he has to say about my service.
 


Thank you for your kind review, i have another review taker let me c what he has to say about my service.

I don't think I have much to add to the above review. Except, you can get far better re-writes with the best spinner.

I will let you judge yourself -

Here is the first paragraph from the article that he sent me.

Who says doll making is only for small girls. The idea of doll making comes from different likes, purposes and
preferences. Some like doll making because it gives them a youthful feeling while a few of them prefer
it for sheer enjoyment. Some of them even prefer doll making with a thought of collecting different
types of dolls. Whatever the reason is, doll making is pretty simple and interesting. A few of them have
taken it from being a passion to more than a profession.

Here is the original that he took and tried to "spin" -
4 Tips on Doll Making Every Doll Enthusiast Should Know


He claimed it passed Copyscape and sent me the screenshot of result from Copyscape premium. If that is true, then Copyscape sucks. I don't have Copyscape premium, so I cannot verify his claim.

Other points (communication / speed / blah blah blah) doesn't matter....
 
He claimed it passed Copyscape and sent me the screenshot of result from Copyscape premium. If that is true, then Copyscape sucks. I don't have Copyscape premium, so I cannot verify his claim.

I just checked it and it did actually pass, which surprised me after comparing it to the original...
 
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