Why Won't My Stupid Ebook Sell For Just $17?

Sales copy needs some tune up + your page needs some candy - some different elements like the following:

- A video/videospokesperson
- written testimonials
- video/audio testimonials
- Guarantee signs
- Moneyback signs
- Some so called real pictures of how you "live the dream"
- endorsements - different from testimonials

These would pretty much add variety to the site and would hook the visitors up.

BTW, this thread shows up when anyone Googles your domain - nice job!

Good luck tho! ;)
 


gregdavidson said:
I've been going nuts over this because my ebook is a heck of a lot better than some of the $47 ebooks out there. It's because I STOLE their ideas! LOL. What am I doing wrong here? My ebook is called Lazy Affiliates. Type that name into your browser followed by a .com and you should see my site.
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The audio quality on your video is sub-par. If you are going to be recording your own voice-overs, either spend a little money on a decent microphone and learn some production techniques or book an hour of time at a local recording studio. If you are selling "MONEY" you can't have low production quality on your video. Also, I think reading some Gary Halbert would help your copy significantly.
 
I know OP is ban, but god damn, you can smell the desperation waffling from his sales letter. It reminds me of the failed salesman in The Simpsons.
 
"In just a few months, I was able to come up with 15 affiliate marketing methods that could work for almost ANYONE."

You fail at minor details such as using words like can instead of could, and removing almost.

Did OP remove the video or do you need to sign up to see it?
 
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