I've been going nuts over this because my ebook is a heck of a lot better than some of the $47 ebooks out there. It's because I STOLE their ideas! LOL. What am I doing wrong here? My ebook is called Lazy Affiliates. Type that name into your browser followed by a .com and you should see my site.
Why Won't My Stupid Ebook Sell For Just $17?
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No testimonials from real people.
No picture of yours.
No proof of income.
All in all, your sales copy is shit.
No picture of yours.
No proof of income.
All in all, your sales copy is shit.
Like Wicked Ice said your sales copy simply sucks. Your signature is quite ironic looking at this thread and your own personal sales copy. Writing a sales copy isn't as easy as you think it is. Your video needs quite a bit of work as well. Proof of income is a big factor.
at the very top of his own sales page "Affiliate marketing can be TOUGH!
I can tell you that through my own personal experience. But one thing I've learned is that it's a whole lot easier when you have a landing page that ACTUALLY CONVERTS.....
The truth is, most affiliate marketers fail miserably at affiliate marketing because they don't have the slightest clue how to write PERSUASIVE COPY."
Take a lesson from yourself homie, make adjustments to just about everything. Not digging the music in the video, your sales copy is not enticing or convincing. I personally though this was a joke... but apparently it is for real.
under your signature and the 20 foot vertical of give away products needs to be consolidated or something... that's redic. The colors don't make me want to buy either, study color psychology.
I can tell you that through my own personal experience. But one thing I've learned is that it's a whole lot easier when you have a landing page that ACTUALLY CONVERTS.....
The truth is, most affiliate marketers fail miserably at affiliate marketing because they don't have the slightest clue how to write PERSUASIVE COPY."
Take a lesson from yourself homie, make adjustments to just about everything. Not digging the music in the video, your sales copy is not enticing or convincing. I personally though this was a joke... but apparently it is for real.
under your signature and the 20 foot vertical of give away products needs to be consolidated or something... that's redic. The colors don't make me want to buy either, study color psychology.
Uggh... I couldn't think of a worst career move than deciding, "I'll sling eBooks in the MMO niche on WaFo!"
You're like a Nigerian trying to pass as an African-American in Japan.
In fact you're taller, more athletic and better-looking than the average brother from the States, so why is it that you can't seem to land that English teaching job in Osaka?
In fact you're taller, more athletic and better-looking than the average brother from the States, so why is it that you can't seem to land that English teaching job in Osaka?
I think it's probably the name/concept.
I'd rather be 'smart' or 'sly' and find a 'easier' way, rather than label myself 'lazy'.
Also the very first thing you say is a 'list of methods'; that isn't a good word to describe what people are looking for.
Further, most people don't want to earn extra money to laze around as depicted, they
want to be their own boss, buy a new car or house, or be able to spend time with their
family. What you have done doesn't indicate 'earn as you sleep', it suggests the person
who buys this ebook is unmotivated and hasn't got anything better to do with their life
than go back to bed.
Orange and red could be perceived as warning/stop colours.
Your headlines suck; you should read John Caples.
Your copy isn't very good.
You're giving away too much free stuff.
Your call to actions are in the wrong place and too weak.
Paydotcom is an untrusted name, and it took 20 seconds to redirect to paypal.
Anyone in their right mind would be put off.
On the other hand, all of that is unsubstantiated opinion.
You should firm up your concept and copy by reading Cashvertising or whatever, and then split-test a handful of different approaches. Once you've got an approach that seems to be working better than the others, stick with it and keep split-testing the different elements of the site.
I'd rather be 'smart' or 'sly' and find a 'easier' way, rather than label myself 'lazy'.
Also the very first thing you say is a 'list of methods'; that isn't a good word to describe what people are looking for.
Further, most people don't want to earn extra money to laze around as depicted, they
want to be their own boss, buy a new car or house, or be able to spend time with their
family. What you have done doesn't indicate 'earn as you sleep', it suggests the person
who buys this ebook is unmotivated and hasn't got anything better to do with their life
than go back to bed.
Orange and red could be perceived as warning/stop colours.
Your headlines suck; you should read John Caples.
Your copy isn't very good.
You're giving away too much free stuff.
Your call to actions are in the wrong place and too weak.
Paydotcom is an untrusted name, and it took 20 seconds to redirect to paypal.
Anyone in their right mind would be put off.
On the other hand, all of that is unsubstantiated opinion.
You should firm up your concept and copy by reading Cashvertising or whatever, and then split-test a handful of different approaches. Once you've got an approach that seems to be working better than the others, stick with it and keep split-testing the different elements of the site.
They need to do way instain mother> who kill thier babbys. becuse these babby cant frigth back?
it was on the news this mroing a mother in ar who had kill her three kids . they are taking the three babby back to new york too lady to rest my pary are with the father who lost his chrilden ; i am truley sorry for your lots
No wonder you offer your copywriting service for 19 bucks, you are fucking lousy copywriter. You can't even write a fucking decent copy. My grandma writes better copy than you.
