Honestly:
First impression: OMG What's this!
Translation: The contrast in colours hurts the eyes. Change it if you can.
Next: OK, so what do I read first?
Translation: You have many links on the right side, so tell me where to click first... err... Do I need to click first? Wasn't it supposed to be some information on the first screen?
Next: Oh, there was info, but it was on top
Translation: People have become picture-blind for any thing that is on the very top of a web page. They will assume it's advertising and ignore it.
Hope this helps, but anyway, maybe you can check
Heptagrama to see how I'm using leaving the very top of the screen free,
Gorgeous Singles to see how not having too many links helps visitors focus on the main part.
Hope this helps.